Thursday, February 26, 2015

IDT1415 CW Entry 13 - The Journey (Second Draft incorporating feedback from Veronica)


The Journey

By Rob Martz

(Second draft)

Sirius was a kind, loving, determined, powerful and protective gryphon-like creature whose head was that of a dog rather than an eagle. ‘Sirius, we must get there before midnight!’ Said Rob while gently letting him know he appreciated his taking him to Tor’s place after his ordeal - losing Elsa, his first love, had clearly broken Sirius’ heart.


Sirius knew how much Rob loved him and how he’d never considered him an animal, but his own family, the son he never had. Sirius would do anything for him as they were one soul; like the time when Rob and Tor were attacked by a pack of wolves and Sirius had scattered them with a single blow of his mighty wings.


They flew over mountains and down dark valleys, past meadows and through forests. They rode storms and fought lighting, delighted in gentle whirlwinds and glided over their own worries feeling strong in each other’s company. The colours below them almost reflected their current feelings. It was winter and so the trees were bare and lonely, just as Sirius was feeling after Elsa’s departure. The deep purple and dark brown hues of the rotting leaves covering the forests almost mirrored Rob’s heartache for Elsa and Tor’s distance.


‘Thank you, thank you, thank you!’ Thought Rob while feeling Sirius’ heartbeat. ‘Thank you for allowing me to be part of your life!’ Still vivid in Rob’s mind the day Tor found in the forest Sirius. Big as a fist and noisy as a cracker Sirius’ family had been savaged by hunters and had missed him by chance. Sirius filled up Rob’s heart in one go, he took possession of it without asking for permission and from that very moment Rob loved Sirius as his own offspring.


Sirius felt Rob’s warmth and love as his hands gently held on to Sirius’ dark gold mane and Rob’s chest pressed against his back as Sirius flew through the air like lighting. Almost supernaturally Sirius embraced Rob, feathers as shields all round him, as if trying to protect him from the stabbing wind.


‘Thank Goodness!’ Thought Rob as he saw the city in the distance. The tattered roofs needing thatching were evident. The square at the outskirts of the settlement waved at them vigorously. The creek ran freely by the side of the houses on the East and washed over the barren winter fields. The market was afflicted by desolation and emptiness at this hour and gave a spectral rendition of an otherwise pleasant and lively street. ‘We’re almost there!’ They couldn’t wait any longer to be reunited with Tor. Rob could almost see the happiest of times with Tor passing as a multicolour flick in front of his eyes in anticipation of their approaching reunion. Rob had met Tor 216 moons ago and their love was still fresh, sincere, impetuous, and strong as the first day.


It had been a long journey fraught with perils and loneliness kept at bay by Rob and Sirius’ love. Storms and lighting had almost translated into Sirius wings being broken and burnt. Luckily the blaze had only hit the back of Rob’s flapping garment and scorched the surface of Sirius’ right side feathers. The cold and stabbing wind had reached deep into their hearts and reminded them of their recent loss making it a heavier burden for Sirius to keep airborne. Only their love gave Rob the strength to wrap Sirius in a cocoon of happiness which brought back their happiest memories and gave Sirius the extra boost to fly higher, faster, fly home.


Tor knew Rob and Sirius were near. He could feel it in his heart. He felt warm, protected, stronger, more confident and invincible. He could almost hear Sirius’ wings powerful fluttering. He could smell Rob’s skin. 18 years had passed and he was still very much one with Rob. He could vividly remember the public house they had met at and the people sitting at the round table opposite the one Rob shared with Karl. Tor remembered how his attention had been captured by this outsider who struggled to communicate in his tongue and used words from other languages as if trying to see which would help him convey his message across. Tor was taken back to that same table, minutes after Karl had gone, with the sole purpose of knowing more about Rob. Little did he know that only half a moon away they would have been sharing the same roof and that a couple of years later a bundle of joy would have crossed their paths: Sirius! Tor had brought him into their lives when he was only 45 days old and had never regretted one single day spent with him. Sirius was meant to be part of their lives and had come to them to fulfil his destiny. If he was not why then did the hunters missed him? A toy bone Sirius used to play with when he was little brought Tor back from his memories. ‘I’ll wait for them outside’ He thought filled with joy.


Anticipation filled Tor’s heart as he struggled not to laugh out loud at the silly happiness that was flooding his senses. He could not let those emotions show, he was too manly to let them transpire. ‘It would not be appropriate’ He thought. What would his parents say? In his culture even a man of his age, almost four decades old, is expected to be strong, emotionless so showing such emotion would not be appropriate of a man in such traditional culture. All the same, as Tor looked down into the valley, his eyes searching for Rob and Sirius, a sense of happiness and joy filled him up and translated into tangible hope. He knew together they could face anything. He needed them both, they were his strength and aim in life. ‘Fly high, Sirius, come home!’ He shouted. ‘Elsa is not gone, but simply waiting for you in a better place and watching over you till you meet again’, he thought with tears of joy filling up his eyes. ‘Come home, come to me!’ He thought so loudly the garden rejoiced.

‘Sirius!’ Tor shouted, his voice trembling with joy as he saw them approaching and Sirius spreading his wings to gracefully land in front of him. ‘Rob!’ He thought again so loudly Rob heard him. All this time waiting seemed like seconds thanks to the joy that filled the air. Tears ran down their cheeks and filled up their hearts. Not one word uttered and yet a whole story was told in the rib-breaking hug that welded the three of them together, in the soft metal-bending touch they shared, in three heart beats shouting in unison: ‘We’re finally together’. They felt invincible!

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