Thursday, February 19, 2015

IDT1415 CW Entry 9 - The Scene



In continuation with the exercises for this week, this entry is about the scene which would follow in my story ‘The Journey’. I published the story via Storybird and so I have pasted just the text below for ease of comprehensibility.



The Journey

By Rob Martz

 

‘Sirius, we must get there before midnight!’ Said Rob while gently letting him know he appreciated his taking him to Tor’s place after his ordeal - losing his first love, Elsa had clearly broken his heart.



Sirius knew how much Rob loved him and how he’d never considered him a pet, but his own family, the son he never had. Sirius would do anything for him as they were one soul.



They flew over mountains and down dark valleys, past meadows and through forests. They rode storms and fought lighting, delighted in gentle whirlwinds and glided over their own worries feeling strong in each other’s company.

‘Thank you, thank you, thank you!’ Thought Rob while feeling Sirius’ heartbeat. ‘Thank you for allowing me to be part of your life!’



Sirius felt Rob’s warmth and love, and almost supernaturally embraced Rob, feathers as shields all round him, as if trying to protect him from the stabbing wind.



‘Thank Goodness!’ Thought Rob as he saw the city in the distance. ‘We’re almost there!’ They couldn’t wait any longer to be reunited with Tor. It had been a long journey fraught with perils and loneliness kept at bay by Rob and Sirius’ love.



Tor knew Rob and Sirius were near. He could feel it in his heart. 18 years had passed and he was still very much one with Rob. He’d brought Sirius into their lives when he was only 45 days old and had never regretted one single day spent with him. Sirius was meant to be part of their lives and had come to them to fulfil his destiny. ‘I’ll wait for them outside’ He thought filled with joy.

Anticipation filled Tor’s heart as he struggled not to laugh out loud at the silly happiness that was flooding his senses. He could not let those emotions show, he was too manly to let them transpire. ‘It would not be appropriate’ He thought.



What would his parents say? Showing such emotion would not be appropriate of a man in such traditional culture. All the same, as Tor looked down into the valley, his eyes searching for Rob and Sirius, a sense of happiness and joy filled him up and translated into tangible hope. ‘Fly high, Sirius, come home!’ He shouted. ‘Elsa is not gone, but simply waiting for you in a better place and watching over you till you meet again’, he thought with tears of joy filling up his eyes. ‘Come home, come to me!’ He thought so loudly the garden rejoiced.




‘Sirius!’ Tor shouted, his voice trembling with joy. ‘Rob!’ He thought again so loudly Rob heard him. All this time waiting seemed like seconds thanks to the joy that filled the air. Tears ran down their cheeks and filled up their hearts. Not one word uttered and yet a whole story was told in the rib-breaking hug that welded the three of them together, in the soft metal-bending touch they shared, in three heart beats shouting in unison: ‘We’re finally together and ready to face our future’. They felt invincible!




THE SCENE



Sirius was hungry and Rob knew it so he touched Sirius’ head lovingly and encouraged him to fly away to fix himself a nice meal. Rob had tried in the past providing him with snacks which Sirius did not seem to appreciate so they both had early understood nurturing was a task Sirius was happier to look into.



It had been a while since the last time Rob had been to the cottage and so as he walked in his happiest memories came to life thanks to the love that permeated every corner. The fire was on and the crackling replicated laughter and joyful voices of the past; the air was warm and sweet, and announced a feast of roast vegetables and freshly homemade bread to come. The flowers by the fire-dogs were perky and joyful almost saying hello with their sweet perfume in the prime of their youth without paying attention to their already decided short existence. Two wooden plates with matching goblets rested ready under the flickering light of candles at the centre of the table. Rob stopped by the chair closest to the window and resting his hands on the carved shoulders he remembered Tor chiseling every inch. The smooth edges of the intricate designs reminded him of Tor’s patience and lasting love. Those red oak back rests fitted harmoniously the cherry and African mahogany seats and sturdy legs. The open space kitchen was cozy and inviting. The copper pots and pans hanging by the ceiling swung delicately like Tai-Chi monks playing tiny crystal cymbals in the air. Tor was busy orchestrating dinner under them and every now and then would raise his hands as if to increase them tempo and invite them to join the concert on the kitchen counter.



Dinner was ready and a buffet of colour made Rob’s eyes delirious and stomach happy! Orange, red, violet, yellow and pink mixed nicely together in a vegetable stew that hypnotised the senses. Tender carrots slices in a think tomato gravy decorated with aubergine strips, potato dices and Armeria Maritima Rosea petals. A mouth-watering sight which Rob struggled not to throw himself into. ‘Tor’, he thought. ‘End this torture, please!’.

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